Journal--Renew/Review Your Idea Bank--Turn in

Journal—Renew/Review Your Idea Bank (about a page)--Turn in!!

} Write down your interests or passions.
} Write down your favorite genres (sci-fi, adventure, romance, comedy, drama, mystery, etc.)
} Write down social issues that concern you.
} Write down political issues that concern you.
} Write down issues with friends (including boyfriends or girlfriends) or family.
} Write down moments, times or experiences in history that interest you.
} Write about stories you wrote that could be turned into a short play.

Your Play Discussion & Presentation

Your Play Discussion/Presentation
Due April 9th!

(Answer these questions with your partner (or individually) and then share these with the class.)

1. What things have worked in this play? Some highlights of your writing process and experience so far.
2. What theme do you hope to get across in your play.
3. What challenges are you facing. Problems, obstacles, rocky patches.
(Audience members can offer helpful suggestions.)

Due 4/9--1.5-2 pages of play typed in Celtx play format

Part of Play due for Peer Edit

1 1/2- 2 pages of your play is due on Thurs 4/9

Make sure it is typed in the Celtx play format--http://celtx.com/download.html.

Per. 5/6 ESSAY REVIEW--Literary Response Essay

Student Essay Info:

This student essay was written about the book called The Joy Luck Club by Amy Tan which explores the relationships between four Chinese American daughters and their often-misunderstood, more traditional Chinese mothers. By sharing quotations from the book, Dawn, the student author of this literary analysis, intends to show how, as they grew up, the daughters came to understand, respect, and appreciate their mothers more.

The paragraph labels in red were added by the teacher and are not part of the original essay.

Read the essay and then answer the questions below. Print out only the answers and give to the teacher.

My Interpretation ofThe Joy Luck Club
By Dawn J.

Children, as they become adults, become more appreciative of their parents. In The Joy Luck Club, the attitudes of four daughters toward their mothers change as the girls mature and come to realize that their mothers aren’t so different after all. (Paragraph 1)

As children, the daughters in this book are ashamed of their mothers and don’t take them very seriously, dismissing them as quirky and odd. “I could never tell my father . . . How could I tell him my mother was crazy?” (p. 117). They don’t try to comprehend their culture, which is a big part of understanding their traditional Chinese mothers. On page 6, one of the daughters states, “I can never remember things I don’t understand in the first place,” referring to Chinese expressions her mother used. When their mothers show pride in them, the girls only show their embarrassment. One daughter shows her shame when she says to her mother, “I wish you wouldn’t do that, telling everyone I’m your daughter” (p. 101). The girls cannot relate to their mothers because they were raised in a different world. No matter how much the mothers care for them or how much they sacrifice to make their girls’ lives better, the daughters are blind to their mothers’ pain and feelings. (Paragraph 2)

All four of the Joy Luck mothers need their daughters to understand them, pass on their spirit after they are gone, and understand what they have gone through for their girls. One mother dreams of doing this on her trip to a new life: “In America I will have a daughter just like me . . . over there nobody will look down on her . . . and she will always be too full to swallow any sorrow! She will know my meaning because I will give her this swan . . . it carries with it all my good intentions” (pp. 3-4). Another mother plans how she will give her daughter this perception:
She [my daughter] has no chi . . . How can I leave the world without leaving her my spirit? So this is what I will do. I will gather together my past and . . . see a thing that has already happened. The pain that cut my spirit loose. I will hold that pain in my hand until it becomes hard and shiny, more clear. And then my fierceness can come back . . . I will use this sharp pain to penetrate my daughter’s tough skin and cut her tiger spirit loose. She will fight me, because this is the nature of two tigers. But I will win and give her my spirit because this is why a mother loves a daughter. (p. 286) (Paragraph 3)

Things don’t exactly turn out the way the mothers hope, though. Their hopes and dreams are shattered when they realize their daughters’ misconceptions of them. On page 282, a mother laments, “When my daughter looks at me, she sees a small, old lady. If she had chuming [inside knowledge of things] she would see a tiger lady.” One daughter sees the fear of the remaining mothers after she tells them that she doesn’t know anything about her dead mother that she can pass on:
They are frightened. In me, they see their own daughters, just as ignorant, just as unmindful of all the truths and hopes they have brought to America. They see daughters who grow impatient when their mothers talk in Chinese, who think they are stupid when they explain things in fractured English . . . They see daughters who will bear grandchildren born without any connecting hope passed from generation to generation. (p. 31) (Paragraph 4)

This fear does not persist, however. As the daughters mature, the two generations discover that they aren’t so different after all. One mother says, “She puts her face next to mine, side by side, and we look at each other in the mirror . . . these two faces, I think, so much the same! The same happiness, the same sadness, the same good fortune, the same faults” (p. 292). One daughter, after her mother’s death, sits down to play the piano that she had refused to touch before to defy her mother. Amy Tan uses the metaphor of two piano pieces to compare the mother to this daughter: “The piece I had played for the recital . . . was on the left-hand side of the page . . . and for the first time . . . I noticed the piece on the right-hand side . . . It had a lighter melody but the same flowing rhythm [as the recital piece and] . . . was longer but faster. And after I played them both . . . I realized they were two halves of the same song” (p. 155). (Paragraph 5)

The daughters, as they grow to be adults, become more appreciative of their mothers. Their attitudes change over time to create an understanding and respect that hadn’t been there before:
I saw what I had been fighting for. It was for me, a scared child, who had run away a long time ago to what I had imagined was a safer place. And hiding in this place, behind my invisible barriers, I knew what lay on the other side: her side attacks. Her secret weapons. Her uncanny ability to find my weakest spots. But in the brief instant that I had peered over the barriers I could finally see what was really there: an old woman, a wok for her armor, a knitting needle for her sword, getting a little crabby as she waited patiently for her daughter to invite her in. (pp. 203-204) (Paragraph 6)

In conclusion, as children, the daughters didn’t understand their mothers or their culture. The daughters were being raised in a different world. Their perceptions of their mothers changed, though, as they grew up and realized that they weren’t so different from them after all. They finally understood and respected their traditional Chinese mothers. (Paragraph 7)

QUESTIONS—ESSAY FORMAT REVIEW:

1. Most essays are four or more paragraphs and do not have to be only five paragraphs as often is taught in school. How many paragraphs does this essay have?

PARAGRAPH 1
2. What do you call the first paragraph of an essay?
3. Write down the HOOK. What kind of Hook is it? Question, Quote, Story, Description/Background information or Surprising Info?
4. Write down the THESIS of this essay (the opinion or statement about the topic—the topic that is being discussed in the essay).

PARAGRAPH 2
5. What do you call the middle paragraphs of an essay?
6. Write down the topic sentence (the sentence that tells you what the paragraph is about) for paragraph 2.
7. The student uses a quote from the book to support the topic sentence. Write down the quote including the page #. (Remember: In a literary response essay, you use quotes from the book/writing with your explanations of those quotes as supporting details for each paragraph.)

PARAGRAPH 3-6
8. Write down the topic sentence for each of these paragraphs. It is not always the first sentence! It’s the sentence that tells you what the paragraph is mainly about.

PARAGRAPH 7
9. What do you call the last paragraph in an essay?
10. Write down the sentence that is similar to the THESIS in the first paragraph.

Screenplay Project--Due Friday, May 29th

The Screenplay Project—Due on Friday, May 29th
(100 points)

Important Note: The finished, typed screenplay must be ready to turn in when class starts on Friday or you lose 20 points off the top!
One day late (or more) is ½ credit.

1) Work individually or with a partner.

2) The final script will be 20 pages typed. Don’t panic! There is a lot of white space in a script. Your script must follow the screenplay style and format as seen in other screenplays and from screenwriting assignments: Single spaced with double spacing between character speaking parts. Use the downloadable CELTX screenwriting program to help guide you.

3) The final screenplay must be original writing—you may extend your play or adapt one of your short stories.

4) Do not plagiarize from another movie or TV show. Please keep your screenplays appropriate. No racism, sexism, homophobia, illegal drug references, extreme violence or explicit sexual scenes.

5) Your screenplay should have a beginning, middle, and end. You must have authentic sounding dialogue, strong, believable characters, a good storyline, conflict, and a resolution or some type of ending for the script.

6) Some class time will be dedicated to the screenplay writing and outlining, but plan on writing the bulk of the screenplay on your own time.

7) When planning your screenplay, make sure you consider a setting, characters, plot and resolution that are different or alternative to the usual Hollywood movies.

8) A 20 page screenplay is about a 20 minute movie since each page roughly equals one minute of movie time.

9) You may also write an original TV show episode or a musical screenplay.

Stage Play--5-10 pages--Due April 27th

Writing a Stage Play
(5-10 pages)

Due April 27th

Journal—Renew/Review Your Idea Bank (about a page)

} Write down your interests or passions.
} Write down your favorite genres (sci-fi, adventure, romance, comedy, drama, mystery, etc.)
} Write down social issues that concern you.
} Write down political issues that concern you.
} Write down issues with friends (including boyfriends or girlfriends) or family.
} Write down moments, times or experiences in history that interest you.
} Write about stories you wrote that could be turned into a short play.

Stage Play Assignment

} You will write a One Act 5+ page stage play with a partner. This will be due Monday, April 27th.
} This will be written for high school students to possibly perform at school. Keep it appropriate or no credit.
} Five pages=Five minutes because of the way the play is formatted. Use Celtx—a free download to help you format your stage play and screenplay. See my blog for download information.

Elements of Your Play/Rubric (60 pts)

} ___(10 pt.) Well-written, revised & edited. Professional quality. Appropriate for high school performance.
} ___(10 pt.) Written for the stage/live performance—no special effects or complicated movie effects. Includes props and stage direction. Setting is clear and fits the play.
} ___(5 pt.) Hook—Gets right into the action. Grabs your audience’s attention.
} ___(10 pt.) Believable characters with authentic dialogue that flows well.
} ___(10 pt.) One dilemma/conflict that is climatic.
} ___(5 pt.) Has resolution or satisfactory ending.
} ___(10 pts) In play format. Use Celtx.

The character list is not included in the 5 pages!

Sample Structure of the One Act Play

Act 1
} Setting
} Scene 1—hook the audience, establish mood, characters and conflict, rising action (beginning)
} Scene 2—climax and maybe falling action (middle)
} Scene 3—falling action and resolution (end)

You will have anywhere from 1-3 scenes for a 5+ page play. Don’t make the scenes too short because it is difficult to get actors on and off the stage quickly.

Fri 3/27--Author Talk/Presentation

Homework Due This Friday 3/27:

Author Talk/Presentation (about 1 page—typed and double spaced)

Assignment: You, the author of your stories, will be reflecting on your insights into your writing. Be prepared to share these with the class on Friday 3/27. Bring the questions as well.

1. What inspired you to write these stories? What were some of your influences (books, other writers, things in life)? Refresh us first on what your stories were about.
2. Most writing has a theme (overall message or meaning). Themes are not just one word like “violence” but a statement like “violence begets violence” or “all is fair in love and war”. What were some of your themes in your stories?
3. What have you learned about your writing process during this short story project?
4. What is your revision/editing process?
5. What part of the creative process came easy for you? What was hard?
6. What do you feel confident about in your writing? (Find at least one thing and explain it!)